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I actually rarely give critiques for talented and good artists. But I detected some errors in this art, so I decided to click on the critique button.
Light source
The light source must actually be getting really detailed. What I mean here is those books on the corner left are supposed to be a little bit brighter, because the light source you are providing over there is the main/big/large.
Reflection
The reflection of the mirror on the clock's mirror is supposed to be a little bit defined, which means here is, I suggest you can use some greyish colours (but not too dark) for the reflection.
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