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November 9, 2009
Story time by `hizuki24
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Story time

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Prints available. <3

It was originally a doodle in class but I like it so I colored it. :D
Well it took more than 6 months because I nearly forget about it. lol

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Thanks for the DD! :D:D
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I actually rarely give critiques for talented and good artists. But I detected some errors in this art, so I decided to click on the critique button.

Light source

The light source must actually be getting really detailed. What I mean here is those books on the corner left are supposed to be a little bit brighter, because the light source you are providing over there is the main/big/large.

Reflection

The reflection of the mirror on the clock's mirror is supposed to be a little bit defined, which means here is, I suggest you can use some greyish colours (but not too dark) for the reflection.

That is all <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" /> I'm really senior in this such theory thingie, but when it comes to practical, I don't really <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="=D" title="=D (Big Grin)" /> Good luck <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" />