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Fragments of love

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...Because I have nothing better to submit. \:

Entry for a contest last year. Didn't win anything of course. :P
Okay the original piece isn't this shiny, I just don't like the former colors somehow.

<edit> They are not yaoi or KH characters, nuff said. :\ </edit>
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I'll try to keep this short and simple if possible:
1. Who's hand is that on the boy's back? Because if it's the other guy's hand, that's one extremely long, deformed and possibly dislocated shoulder.
2. Where does the silver-haired guy's left hand finish exactly? Are the sleeves super long or something?
3. While i do like the colours chosen and the colouring technique, i must say the drawing seems awfully crowded in the middle. I know some people appreciate a very detailed picture but sometimes less is more.
I could probably spot more anatomical awkwardness, but i wouldn't want to split the hair too much.