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I usually don't ask for crits on commission works.
 But maybe I should since I rarely have personal works nowadays. *sigh* commission by [link] Comments nice work!
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 -- चित्रपतङ्ग!!!  Wow
  --   beautiful
i love the neon highlights throughout it(like on the birds wings & on the moon), it really adds to the picture i think.-- Give a man a match and he'll be warm for an hour... Set him on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  I love the girl's hair and the bird is such a pretty blue! <333
-- 'Trust them, even when they betray you, because there is no one else to believe in.'  The bird is great and the background is PURE love! =3
-- Granatapfel - the apple of sin with adam and eva - please enjoy our works  Oh man, this is gorgeous.
-- Will put something here soon. Maybe.  the whole thing looks awesome, but the background is especially impressive. love it : D
-- sketch blog: [link]  reminds me Claymore o_o
-- Have a beautiful day... ^^  i damn envy your drawing ability... i can only draw sticky picture... and as a plus the girl is hot @@
-- Tutto ciò che degli altri ci irrita può portarci alla comprensione di noi stessi. |
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Critiques
I don't really remember, but okay...
I love the background and the lighting effect. The blue bird fits in with the picture pretty well.
Gotta love the character too.
I don't know what to actually critique but uh... the talons on the bird are missing? Maybe they're just hidden...
ROFL.
Other than that, it's a really wonderful picture and I don't see why anyone wouldn't buy it as a print (hence the "Buy this Print" button). I would buy it if I had enough money for it though.
Man I need to get a job...
The Background is nicely done, providing an excellent ambient to the overall theme of the Image, and a realistic setting which adds to the feeling of the picture.
The actual character is great, you put in her a great amount of detail, and it added a nice touch.
However, I must correct you on one little thing. (but I do feel improper saying this, don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to put anyone down or insult them...)
The lighting on your character is, from my point of view, a little bit off. Judging from the location of the moon, and no other obvious sources of light, It seems that you put in too much light, and the directionality of the moon to the location of the light to her body also seems off. If the only light source is the moon, then there would me more shadows, and not as much light, because the moon by itself in not that brilliant.
Aside from that, there really is nothing more that seems off, it is a very nicely constructed image.
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