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...Because I have nothing better to submit. \:

Entry for a contest last year. Didn't win anything of course.

Okay the original piece isn't this shiny, I just don't like the former colors somehow.

<edit> They are not yaoi or KH characters, nuff said. :\ </edit>

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Submitted on: May 27, 2009
Image Size: 768 KB
Resolution: 759×1075

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Critique by ~BlacKat-K May 28, 2009, 8:59:22 AM

I'll try to keep this short and simple if possible:
1. Who's hand is that on the boy's back? Because if it's the other guy's hand, that's one extremely long, deformed and possibly dislocated shoulder.
2. Where does the silver-haired guy's left hand finish exactly? Are the sleeves super long or something?
3. While i do like the colours chosen and the colouring technique, i must say the drawing seems awfully crowded in the middle. I know some people appreciate a very detailed picture but sometimes less is more.
I could probably spot more anatomical awkwardness, but i wouldn't want to split the hair too much.

What do you think?

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~SelaneLeynault Apr 26, 2012

I agree with the artist critique by BlacKat but would like to say that I like the contrast of heavy detail on the clothing and less detail in the background. It's a technique employed by one of my very favorite artists here on DA to a lesser degree than yours but to great success, in my opinion.